Goals for second semester:

I have a few goals that if achieved, will no doubt allow me to feel confident when I first set foot on whatever college campus.  First, I want to to rid of the wordiness that is sometimes prevalent in my essays.  This wordiness takes away from the overall flow of the essay as a whole.  Second, I want to be able to write an introduction that is less broad, but still captures the reader's attention without giving away the bulk of the essay.  Finally, I want to be able to write a conclusion that sums up my essay, is creative, but does not simply restate my thesis in the introduction.